I Feel A Disturbance In The Force.........Let's Do Poetry! by Boondawg
Started on : 04-07-2011 04:14 PM
Replies : 59
Last post by : heybjorn on 04-30-2011 12:44 PM
Apr 18th, 2011
Scottzilla79 Member Posts: 2573 From: Chicago, IL Registered: Oct 2009
y'all are gaymos!
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Apr 19th, 2011
Boondawg Member Posts: 38235 From: Displaced Alaskan Registered: Jun 2003
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quote Originally posted by fogglethorpe: Cry Alone by fogglethorpe I’ll share with you a secret that none has ever known, and trust in you to keep it- but I will cry alone. I’ll spill the old transgression for which I can’t atone, and beg your intercession- but I will cry alone. I’ll boast of some endeavor or seed that I have sown, and make you think I’m clever- but I will cry alone. I’ll leave you feeling certain you know me, skin and bone, go home and draw the curtain- and then I’ll cry alone.
I like.
Very much.
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Boondawg Member Posts: 38235 From: Displaced Alaskan Registered: Jun 2003
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quote Originally posted by Scottzilla79: y'all are gaymos!
But that feeling came from
you !
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hugh Member Posts: 5563 From: Clementon,NJ,USA Registered: Jun 2000
Roses are red Violets are blue I've got a lawnmower Can you swim?
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BlackThunderGT Member Posts: 2048 From: The Rock Registered: Apr 2009
quote Originally posted by williegoat: FLEAS (the world's shortest poem, the author of which is the subject of some debate) Adam had'em
Fleas II
Eve
had’em
too
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Boondawg Member Posts: 38235 From: Displaced Alaskan Registered: Jun 2003
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Undone Unrun ~ Boondawg A storm is brewing up ahead, The air is thick, the sky is red. The birds are gone, all life has fled, The grass is brown, the earth is dead. To this last thing, my eye's I'll lend, I'll be right here until the end. Why I stay must now be said, Dead-alive is not quite dead. [This message has been edited by Boondawg (edited 04-19-2011).]
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tbone42 Member Posts: 8477 From: Registered: Apr 2010
Bug in my ear Mug full of beer Drug? Have no fear Hug someone dear Jug Everclear
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03:45 PM
Scottzilla79 Member Posts: 2573 From: Chicago, IL Registered: Oct 2009
quote Originally posted by Boondawg: But that feeling came from you !
LOL the swishifying effect in action.
Seriously I don't know poetry but read it all , some good stuff!
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04:19 PM
fogglethorpe Member Posts: 4828 From: Valley of the Sun Registered: Jul 2001
Idols by fogglethorpe The truth is often covered by a false semantic grace, but mathematics damns the idols of the marketplace. The truth is often threatened by a prejudice we save, but open minds defeat the bully, idols of the cave. The truth is often poisoned by a tale that we imbibe, but study is the antidote for idols of the tribe. The truth is often sacrificed at altars of our views, but idols of the theatre will bow if we refuse.
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Apr 20th, 2011
Boondawg Member Posts: 38235 From: Displaced Alaskan Registered: Jun 2003
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Enders Game ~ Boondawg Under, over, inbetween, Things unsaid are what I mean. Saying blue when seeing red, I love you means my love is dead. Barely gone for just a day, I miss you means please stay away. Things I lost I cannot greave, Forever means until I leave. But to the end, I will stay, When it's YOU that goes away. [This message has been edited by Boondawg (edited 04-20-2011).]
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Apr 21st, 2011
williegoat Member Posts: 19470 From: Glendale, AZ Registered: Mar 2009
Ode to a Fiero by williegoat There once was a car made by Pontiac,
who's engine was found to be in the back.
While some would inquire,
“Don't those things catch fire?”
Others swear, “They belong on the track!”
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Boondawg Member Posts: 38235 From: Displaced Alaskan Registered: Jun 2003
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Toe's Each His Own ~ Boondawg To each his own is how it's known, But wrong for me to suck my own? [This message has been edited by Boondawg (edited 04-21-2011).]
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12:42 AM
williegoat Member Posts: 19470 From: Glendale, AZ Registered: Mar 2009
Seldom, here on PFF, does discourse result in a fight, though some members lean to the left, and others adhere to the right.
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fierofetish Member Posts: 19173 From: Northeast Spain Registered: Jul 2003
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Eyes of brown
nose of black
long pink tongue
and so layed-back.
Silent allegiance
heart of gold
thoughts inside
never told.
Tail of hope,
swaying free
ears that prick,
He talks to me.
Not in words
as we know well
but what he says
is for us to tell.
lives not long
compared to us
but his life is full
of eager trust.
A simple dog
a friend in strife
asks for little
would give his life.
Why? because
he loves us so
why? because
we'll never know.
Man's best friend
is what we say
something new
every day.
I'm proud to call him
MY best friend
He'll be with me
Until the end.
At my feet
he always is
never leaves
the choice is his.
Stroke his fur
caress his ears
look into eyes
that have no fear.
As long as we love him.
He will always love us.
even IF we don't love him
He will STILL love us.
Nick
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05:36 AM
cliffw Member Posts: 35922 From: Bandera, Texas, USA Registered: Jun 2003
Very good Nick.
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07:53 AM
RotrexFiero Member Posts: 3692 From: Pittsburgh, PA Registered: Jul 2002
Maybe someone should assemble these all into a Fiero Poetry book? At least the original works.
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fogglethorpe Member Posts: 4828 From: Valley of the Sun Registered: Jul 2001
quote Originally posted by RotrexFiero: Maybe someone should assemble these all into a Fiero Poetry book? At least the original works.
My work is copyrighted. I don't know if anyone else's is. So I politely decline the offer.
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Boondawg Member Posts: 38235 From: Displaced Alaskan Registered: Jun 2003
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quote Originally posted by fogglethorpe: My work is copyrighted. I don't know if anyone else's is. So I politely decline the offer.
Mine is not, and rightfully so.
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Apr 22nd, 2011
JazzMan Member Posts: 18612 From: Registered: Mar 2003
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I think a copyright would burst into flames if it got near anything I wrote, hehehe...
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Apr 30th, 2011
heybjorn Member Posts: 10079 From: pace fl Registered: Apr 2007
Ramblin' Two lane road, early morning, On the road again. Never sure where I am going But I've learned from where I've been. Every town I've ever seen, Made another friend. Stayed with them a day or two Hit the road again. There have been a few good women, Once, and then a while Can't remember all their names But I cherish every smile. One day I will stop this ramblin' When I cannot stand the rain. Find a home for burned out sailors Who can't recall their name. Two lane road, early morning.
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