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I Feel A Disturbance In The Force.........Let's Do Poetry! by Boondawg
Started on: 04-07-2011 04:14 PM
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Last post by: heybjorn on 04-30-2011 12:44 PM
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y'all are gaymos!
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quote
Originally posted by fogglethorpe:

Cry Alone

by fogglethorpe


I’ll share with you a secret
that none has ever known,
and trust in you to keep it-
but I will cry alone.

I’ll spill the old transgression
for which I can’t atone,
and beg your intercession-
but I will cry alone.

I’ll boast of some endeavor
or seed that I have sown,
and make you think I’m clever-
but I will cry alone.

I’ll leave you feeling certain
you know me, skin and bone,
go home and draw the curtain-
and then I’ll cry alone.


I like.
Very much.
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quote
Originally posted by Scottzilla79:

y'all are gaymos!


But that feeling came from you!
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I've got a lawnmower
Can you swim?
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quote
Originally posted by williegoat:

FLEAS
(the world's shortest poem, the author of which is the subject of some debate)

Adam
had'em


Fleas II

Eve
had’em
too

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Undone Unrun ~ Boondawg

A storm is brewing up ahead,
The air is thick, the sky is red.

The birds are gone, all life has fled,
The grass is brown, the earth is dead.

To this last thing, my eye's I'll lend,
I'll be right here until the end.

Why I stay must now be said,
Dead-alive is not quite dead.

[This message has been edited by Boondawg (edited 04-19-2011).]

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Bug in my ear
Mug full of beer
Drug? Have no fear
Hug someone dear
Jug Everclear
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quote
Originally posted by Boondawg:


But that feeling came from you!


LOL the swishifying effect in action.
Seriously I don't know poetry but read it all , some good stuff!
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Idols

by fogglethorpe


The truth is often covered by
a false semantic grace,
but mathematics damns the idols
of the marketplace.

The truth is often threatened by
a prejudice we save,
but open minds defeat the bully,
idols of the cave.

The truth is often poisoned by
a tale that we imbibe,
but study is the antidote
for idols of the tribe.

The truth is often sacrificed
at altars of our views,
but idols of the theatre
will bow if we refuse.
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Enders Game ~ Boondawg

Under, over, inbetween,
Things unsaid are what I mean.

Saying blue when seeing red,
I love you means my love is dead.

Barely gone for just a day,
I miss you means please stay away.

Things I lost I cannot greave,
Forever means until I leave.

But to the end, I will stay,
When it's YOU that goes away.

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Ode to a Fiero
by williegoat

There once was a car made by Pontiac,
who's engine was found to be in the back.
While some would inquire,
“Don't those things catch fire?”
Others swear, “They belong on the track!”

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Toe's Each His Own ~ Boondawg

To each his own is how it's known,
But wrong for me to suck my own?

[This message has been edited by Boondawg (edited 04-21-2011).]

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Report this Post04-21-2011 01:03 AM Click Here to See the Profile for williegoatClick Here to visit williegoat's HomePageSend a Private Message to williegoatDirect Link to This Post
Seldom, here on PFF,
does discourse result in a fight,
though some members lean to the left,
and others adhere to the right.
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Eyes of brown
nose of black
long pink tongue
and so layed-back.

Silent allegiance
heart of gold
thoughts inside
never told.

Tail of hope,
swaying free
ears that prick,
He talks to me.

Not in words
as we know well
but what he says
is for us to tell.

lives not long
compared to us
but his life is full
of eager trust.

A simple dog
a friend in strife
asks for little
would give his life.

Why? because
he loves us so
why? because
we'll never know.

Man's best friend
is what we say
something new
every day.

I'm proud to call him
MY best friend
He'll be with me
Until the end.

At my feet
he always is
never leaves
the choice is his.

Stroke his fur
caress his ears
look into eyes
that have no fear.

As long as we love him.
He will always love us.
even IF we don't love him
He will STILL love us.


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Very good Nick.
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Maybe someone should assemble these all into a Fiero Poetry book?

At least the original works.

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quote
Originally posted by RotrexFiero:

Maybe someone should assemble these all into a Fiero Poetry book?

At least the original works.


My work is copyrighted. I don't know if anyone else's is. So I politely decline the offer.
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quote
Originally posted by fogglethorpe:


My work is copyrighted. I don't know if anyone else's is. So I politely decline the offer.


Mine is not, and rightfully so.
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I think a copyright would burst into flames if it got near anything I wrote, hehehe...
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Ramblin'


Two lane road, early morning,
On the road again.
Never sure where I am going
But I've learned from where I've been.

Every town I've ever seen,
Made another friend.
Stayed with them a day or two
Hit the road again.

There have been a few good women,
Once, and then a while
Can't remember all their names
But I cherish every smile.

One day I will stop this ramblin'
When I cannot stand the rain.
Find a home for burned out sailors
Who can't recall their name.

Two lane road, early morning.
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